I just wanted to say a good news and a bad news to those who're following my novel(although I doubt anyone is following)...
Good news: I've been working my ass on continuing chapter one of the novel... however, I'm making very slow progress; I frequently get random ideas while wondering around, so I write/type them down before I forget them. Note, they are VERY RANDOM stuff, so I don't still don't know how to connect them to the main story(is there?).
Bad news: this is very simple, yet grave news... I'm running out of ideas!! I needed to go for visual novels as reference, but still I'm running out...
C'mon, anyone? Give me an idea, please!! >_<

ARe the links on here to your story because if they are i would like to help in anyway i can!!
ReplyDeleteHere it is:
ReplyDeleteWhite Under Black chapter 1: Let the games begin (unfinished)
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Thank you for your advice and I would like to know what your idea is. I just don't want to greive forever....that would be really bad and I am trying to start eating again, my friends and boyfriend are supporting me every step of the way and I want to thank you for your advice and support!!!
ReplyDeleteKeep on writing dude!
ReplyDeleteUhm... you actually read it? O_O
ReplyDeleteoh..i haven't read your novel..what is its genre..? give me the link and ill read it and perhaps give a nice advice if i can.XD
ReplyDeleteI love your story and its awesome and I can't wait to read more
ReplyDeletehey..ive read some of its pages but I really think you should reconstruct it..hmm..maybe the words are so simple and the start of the story is a lil cliche..you should make more exciting so that the readers wont get bored okay..? XD
ReplyDeleteanother thing..try to include some pictures to help the readers visualize the setting or what the scene in the story is occurring..even if its from the net the picture you get, its still helps.. Xd
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ReplyDeleteMy worst nightmare, revealed... T_T
ITs a good story!!!
ReplyDelete{I"m posting the starting of mine up soon}
You're gonna make one?! D:
ReplyDeleteI started mentally a year ago, im finally getting it organized and written down...it's a kidnap story. I've only written one before, and that was for my english class
ReplyDeleteThe whole chapter one has been finished(a long time ago), but I just have to rewrite it(started it a long time ago too)... so please wait another 'long time' 'til I finish it up... @_@
ReplyDeleteOh crap, I concentrated on the side story too much!!! I FORGOT ABOUT THE CHAPTER ONE!!! DX
ReplyDeleteSorry, I gotta get my ass on fixing it up... T_T
Basically he is mad because i will not date him and know we are constanntly fighting and he wants to forget that we ever knew each other because he is not getting his way.
ReplyDeleteyea hes being a butt head. he says im harrasing him when he keeps txting me back and stuff :/
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